First draft of script
- bethany-wales
- Feb 26, 2015
- 1 min read
I have finished the first draft of my script!
Although I am happy with the script, I am so shocked at how long it is. Reading through, there is a lot of detail included which I am pleased with, however I think this has made the script far too long. At the moment I am a little unsure where to cut, so have sent the script to a friend to read over for a second opinion.
My first draft can be found here:
http://bethany-wales.wix.com/horsemouthfilms#!the-scripts/c1guz
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