Final Script
Having made a few more cuts and changes, I have settled on my final script. The final scrpt for Garden of Eva can be found here:...
Farrah GFE
https://vimeo.com/76285756 I found this film on Short of the week, about a young girl Farrah who moves to New York and becomes an escort....
Second draft
Having recieved feedback on my first draft, I have made a few changes to my script. My second draft can be found here:...
Feedback
Last night I gave my first draft of the script to a friend who has no previous knowledge of the industry and asked for some feedback. I...
First draft of script
I have finished the first draft of my script! Although I am happy with the script, I am so shocked at how long it is. Reading through,...
12. Final comments
D: I’ve met some wonderful girls, I’ve met some horrific girls, I’ve met girls who have tried to rob me, I’ve met girls who have loved...
11. The law
D: I think the laws possibly got it quite badly wrong. More could be done to look after girls, by changing the law, and look after the...
10: Unattractive parts of industry
D: There’s allot of girls do it for drug money, there’s a lot of girls do it because they’re coerced or forced.. into doing it. Um,...
9: Attractive parts of industry
D: It’s the glamour. Erm, its young attractive girls… 90% of the girls are attractive, young girls, which is glamourous. The way its...
8. Differences between work and personal life
D: I find, sex differs with escorts… because escorts are more experienced, more skilful, and less inhibited about sex than, I don’t know...